Thursday, April 15, 2010

War inside.

I will always feel this void,
The bits of life you took away,
I don’t know if I’ll ever have them,
Or if things will change even if I do.

But this feeling inside,
Every time I’m reminded.
Sends my temper shooting,
I could almost explode,
It’s like a war inside.

But there’s a bitter acceptance,
That I’ll never get it back.
I just have to live this way,
Though it’s not like I planned.

But this rage inside,
With all my pride,
Wants to fight with you,
And snatch it back.
But you won my time.

Oh, and this feeling inside,
Every time I’m reminded.
Sends my temper shooting,
I could almost explode,
It’s like a war inside.

15 comments:

Chez said...

hey, my name is chezney and i write poetry/songs also. "war inside" spoke to me, can you give me your email? My computer isnt letting me download the thing i need to email you. Thx...

Green Tea said...

Sending you my love,...wishing you peace.

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akansha said...

nice feeling.. ;)

Joanne Amos said...

That was good. Be who you are and live each day to the fullest.

Krissty Sunshine said...

Really good(= As i read it i felt the emotions threw the words. i liked that

Liisa-Andra said...

Oh, wow, you have written all of these?

Amazing. :)

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