Friday, January 15, 2010

Suicide Note

The frustration was pulling me down,
It should have been the other way round.

So here I am, rather was,
Explaining my end to you,
Or what came right before.

But if I leave it this way,
You will never know the reason.
Every time you think of me,
And how things could have been,
You’ll try to live as me,
You’ll imagine my every thought,
And why I didn’t make it.

My end will remain a mystery,
And the rest of me as well.
That’s exactly how it was.
Right before my end had come,
A mystery I was to me.

12 comments:

lost in illusion said...

u rocked it evem while dyimg mam :P
vut dude... ill quote a great persomality... 'we all deserve to ve happy... u me amd them' :D
live forever... JEE JAA :P

Sakshi said...

gr8...
thank god u didnt mention ne of r names in it... :P
one of the finest creation of urs....

shrey said...

nice.. :)

mehak said...

oye!!kya baat hai!
gud wrk

bhaskar said...

death note..!! nice job rachit..

Siona said...

wow...don't do it!

inkreadable said...

Very nice and touching indeed. =)

inkreadable said...

Very nice and touching indeed!! =)

Steve said...

Great work. You've got talent.

Reminishing said...

hey buddy ..this remin here..i was going thru ur blog poems awesumly written.... well im gettin complex about mah poems now...well i really impressed by ur stuff... hoping to see more of ur creativity...adioz...

非凡 said...

I'm appreciate your writing skill.Please keep on working hard.^^

Johnny Grenadier said...

http://suicidehotlines.com/

1-800-784-2433 National suicide prevention hotline

Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem...